I have only recently realised what a great benefit to the process of writing an editor is, My editor is just starting out but she is fully involved in helping me address the continuity issues and basic grammatical errors that I tend to to make. Spell checkers are great but bit nothing beats a well trained eye to sniff out those silly little errors.
For those of you that have read the Second Coming you should notice an improvement in continuity and structure as well as grammar and punctuation.
Despite good marks in English at school, and let's remember I went to school in the days when typing classes were for girls while boys did manly stuff like woodwork, correct grammar and punctuation are a bit of a mystery to me. I got caught up in the era where the precursors of the Green Party controlled education and decided that good grammar was not necessary to rite a good story. How wrong they were. And yes I wish I had learnt to type plopperly as, as you can imagine typing a full length novel is a bit of a mission with all the mistakes and backspacing.
I feel that my creative juices flow best when I write something long hand but it is also pretty pointless giving a manuscript to someone to type up as my handwriting is also atrocious. I bought a livescribe pen to convert my scrawl to text recently, unfortunately these pens are not designed with the likes of me in mind. They require neat and well formed script -which I haven't, so this experiment to truncate the editing process has only been partially successful.
But back to the editor. If you need editing assistance try these guys. http://styxpress.co.nz/
Finally found some gravel for the new toy. the first road I found had just been graded but I found a few others today that I could have a good fang down. Need to get the helmet camera out and take some video.
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Saturday, 26 October 2013
Saturday, 9 March 2013
The Skid Chronicles Part 2
Excerpt form the The Skid Chronicles part 2
Bruce wondered why he had never thought
of hijacking one of the patrol ships before as piloting one was just like
playing on a virtual flight trainer game on the internet. He blissfully ignored
the fact that he would never have got even close to one of them previously. He
also ignored the probability that even if he had got aboard he would just as likely have blown the space port and
himself to bits rather than getting off
the ground, let alone managing to get back
to earth.
Myfair had shown him what most of the
controls did, showed him how to set a course to anywhere on Skid and back to
earth, but nowhere else. Myfair had also suggested that he not fiddle with
various knobs and buttons on one side of the console in a most un-Skidlike
manner. This was like a red rag to a bull to Bruce who suspected they must
control the ships weapons systems and he itched for a suitable target and an
opportunity to test them.
Bruce enjoyed piloting the space craft,
though he was looking forward to seeing what had become of his farm even more. The
farm that he had hewn from the landscape just like his ancestors had hacked
their’s out of the bush. He conveniently forgot about the huge trees that his
pioneering ancestors had had to deal with, with nothing more than an axe and a
pit saw and the years of superhuman struggle they’d had to break in the farm.
Bruce felt as if he was coming home after a long trip away, which after he thought
about it for a moment was quite odd.
Odd because not so long ago he hated the place, hated the
planet and the people that inhabited it and yearned for the real home that he
thought he would never see again. Now he felt some sort of proprietary interest
in what was happening there as if it was his and not the property of those that
lived there. He wondered if he would feel the same way if he ever got back to
his real home again. He thought about that possibility for a moment and found
to his surprise that going home or not going home didn't seem to mean as much
to him as he believed it once had. All he had always wanted was embodied in the
baby that Sue held, and well maybe in Sue herself although he wasn’t all that
sure about that yet.
Bruce shook his head in disbelief. It
was as if whatever emotional bonds he had developed for the place he had grown
up and bound him there had been shattered. If he did ever go back home to earth
his homecoming would certainly be different. While his absence had not been
missed before, this time his departure had been far more public and would be
hard to hide. He was also determined that if he did return to earth it would be
in full control over his memories.
It wasn't hard to conjure up a vision of
Trev being grilled by the thought police, or of Mrs Pratt who must be having a
hard time explaining the disappearance of little Bruce to the cops and the gun
she toted.
As the space ship sped over the vast
empty Skidian plain Bruce caught sight of the meandering line of trees that
marked the river beside which he had built his home on Skid, more correctly the
house that had been built for him. He thought he recognized the line of low
hills close to the farm and looked around nervously for Myfair because despite
his new found confidence in piloting the craft he wasn’t actually sure of the
procedure for landing the spaceship.
How
did you land these things? He wondered. He needn't have worried. As the
patrol craft skimmed over the trees the farm came into view and after making a
circuit of the farm it descended, slowed and landed gently beside the barn
without any input from Bruce who was left wondering whether he had actually
been in control at all.
During the circuit Bruce had seen people
running towards the house from various points about the farm and wondered why
they would do that. None of them had turned up where the craft had landed,
though as he walked down the ramp behind Myfair he could see some Skidians
looking down the hill at them. That struck him as a little strange. But he was
more interested in the farm which from the air looked much as he'd left it.
Looking around Bruce wasn't so sure as
he looked closer. The garden they had so carefully planted and tended now looked
like a wilderness and the fence around it sagged as if something had tried to
jump over it and landed on top of it instead.
Bruce wrinkled his nose distastefully,
the place had an air of sad neglect, like a rental house, where nobody really
cared about the place because it wasn't their's and it showed in the rank grass,
the sagging gates and the tools and chairs left discarded about the yard.
The dogs ran out of the space ship behind
them and reacquainted themselves with their old stamping ground as Sue carry
the baby and Bruce followed Myfair up the hill towards the house.
Mitch stood indecisively at the door of
the space ship and looked out. Nobody had told him to do anything so he wasn’t
sure what he should be doing and he was not used to alighting from an aircraft
without a military salute to acknowledge and a red carpet to stride
purposefully down. Should he follow the others or stay put? He asked himself.
He could see some people peering down the hill at them and wasn't sure whether
they were friendly or not. They didn't look too happy. Some looked as if they
were brandishing objects that looked very much like weapons. His old fear of
open spaces made him feel giddy and he teetered on the threshold wondering if
he was going to faint. He reached out a hand to support himself in the doorway
and told himself to pull together.
The real fear of being left behind
overrode the other conflicting emotions in Mitch’s mind and he made a move to
follow the other three. The door closing behind him as he stepped out of the
spaceship made the decision final. He trotted off after the others as fast as
his out of condition body would allow him and came abreast of them puffing and
coughing wondering if he had the energy to make the climb the rest of the way
up the hill.
Myfair recognized most of the people
standing on the hill and saw them relax as soon as they realized who it was
alighting from the patrol ship. Perhaps
they’ve had other less welcome visitors he decided, wandering bands of
desperate Skidians looking for food and shelter or maybe more formidable, more
demanding visitors from the better appointed industrial complexes. Maybe the
likes of Mischief had learnt of his absence and decided to test the limits of
their power.
Saturday, 9 February 2013
What I have learnt about Indie book promotion... part 2
What have I learnt? Obviously not enough. Think I might as well watch the cricket.
Saturday, 26 January 2013
What I have learnt about Indie book promotion...
While I am busy pecking away at the second novel in the Skid Chronicles series I have also been looking at how to widen my readership for the first book in the series and make my fortune. Yeah right. Making a living at this would be great but I am not about to give up my day job.
I've tried quite a few things to sell copies of my first novel and get a few good reviews on Amazon as that is the key it seems to me-good 5 star reviews. I have twisted people's arms and basically told them to buy my $0.99 novel and write me a good review. This tack has had limited success even when I have offered to give people a dollar as there are far more people that have said to my face that they will download the Kindle version or buy the hard copy than have actually done so. Amazon has pretty good reporting. Clearly I haven't twisted enough arms hard enough.
I have also tried Google Adwords and Facebook adds to no avail, admittedly I can only send people to the Amazon pages via my still dirtbike themed website. Note to self....spend some time on developing a new page. It might help.
All I can say is that I am pleased I tried this avenue but didn't spend too much money in this area. I did spend a chunk of cash on 't' shirts that I mostly gave away that apart from my wife to be I don't believe anyone actually wears. If you want one drop me line.
I've created a Twitter account along with all those other people who create accounts to self promote their product or service. But Twitter is a bit like Facebook, just because you have 'friends' doesn't mean they are going to read your posts and even if they do, it doesn't mean this is going to translate into any sales.
My latest scheme as per all the reading I have done is to generate a media release for the book. Now I just need to find out where to send it. I have never felt comfortable with self promotion and rejection but my skin is getting thicker so maybe I will just send it too as many people as possible. The good old shotgun approach.
Finally all the good blogs and websites say that all I have to do is create is a community of interest and I'll become an instant online best seller and make my fortune.
So if anyone actually reads this blog and wants to become part of my community you can join me on Facebook or Twitter-I promise not to twist your arm. But in case you have forgotten here is the link to the book......amazon.com/Skid-Tasting-plant-ebook/dp/B009FIAMXS
Actually mostly what I have learnt is that there is plenty of good reading out there and at the end of the day nothing much has changed in the world of publishing. While we can do a lot of things to promote our masterpieces and be successfull at it (in an ideal world successfull for me would be making my living out of writing) at the end of the day luck and being in the right place at the right time has a lot to do with it.
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I've tried quite a few things to sell copies of my first novel and get a few good reviews on Amazon as that is the key it seems to me-good 5 star reviews. I have twisted people's arms and basically told them to buy my $0.99 novel and write me a good review. This tack has had limited success even when I have offered to give people a dollar as there are far more people that have said to my face that they will download the Kindle version or buy the hard copy than have actually done so. Amazon has pretty good reporting. Clearly I haven't twisted enough arms hard enough.
I have also tried Google Adwords and Facebook adds to no avail, admittedly I can only send people to the Amazon pages via my still dirtbike themed website. Note to self....spend some time on developing a new page. It might help.
All I can say is that I am pleased I tried this avenue but didn't spend too much money in this area. I did spend a chunk of cash on 't' shirts that I mostly gave away that apart from my wife to be I don't believe anyone actually wears. If you want one drop me line.
I've created a Twitter account along with all those other people who create accounts to self promote their product or service. But Twitter is a bit like Facebook, just because you have 'friends' doesn't mean they are going to read your posts and even if they do, it doesn't mean this is going to translate into any sales.
My latest scheme as per all the reading I have done is to generate a media release for the book. Now I just need to find out where to send it. I have never felt comfortable with self promotion and rejection but my skin is getting thicker so maybe I will just send it too as many people as possible. The good old shotgun approach.
Finally all the good blogs and websites say that all I have to do is create is a community of interest and I'll become an instant online best seller and make my fortune.
So if anyone actually reads this blog and wants to become part of my community you can join me on Facebook or Twitter-I promise not to twist your arm. But in case you have forgotten here is the link to the book......amazon.com/Skid-Tasting-plant-ebook/dp/B009FIAMXS
Actually mostly what I have learnt is that there is plenty of good reading out there and at the end of the day nothing much has changed in the world of publishing. While we can do a lot of things to promote our masterpieces and be successfull at it (in an ideal world successfull for me would be making my living out of writing) at the end of the day luck and being in the right place at the right time has a lot to do with it.
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My first Press Release
FOR
IMMEDIATE RELEASE:
Contact:
Keith
Fenwick
PO
Box 90312
Victoria
St West
Auckland
0272066091
New Zealand
Author Publishes Sci Fi Novel on Amazon Kindle
Auckland
NZ, January 29 2013 – New Zealand author, Keith Fenwick, recently released a
science fiction novel, Skid - The First
Chronicle, the first novel of a science fiction trilogy.
In
his first novel “Skid - The First
Chronicle Skid” Keith Fenwick takes us to a highly sophisticated world where
society is about to fall apart. A world whose leader’s arrogantly assume that
they can do no wrong in the face of the dangerous signs of a disintegrating world
around them. A disintegration caused by a failing in the technology that for so
long has made them undisputed masters of the known universe.
Readers
will immediately recognize the parallels with life as we know it on earth today
as we struggle with the implications of climate change on our world and our
lifestyles.
The
plot addresses some serious themes, touching on issues as wide as the survival
of any planet in the universe - from pollution, to the exploitation of natural
resources - the pros and cons of collective versus individual action - organic
versus synthetic food - survival with humor versus the alienating aspects of a
form of political correctness.
The
use of humor makes the book work effectively - mainly through the reactions of
the "offworlders", Bruce (from New Zealand) and Sue (from the USA).
Both Bruce and Sue react in stereotypical ways as caricatures of the cultures
they come from - the skillful and amusing portrayal of their characteristics
allows readers to laugh at their own attitudes.
Unlike
many science fiction books, skid doesn't get bogged down in detail or stray so
far from known worlds that you lose the plot. Aficionados of science fiction
and anyone who enjoys a good read will enjoy this novel.
This is Keith Fenwick’s
first novel.
Contact details for Keith
Fenwick
Phone Keith: (064) 0272
066 091
Email Keith: fenwickk@vodafone.co.nz
Kindle version http://www.amazon.com/Skid-Tasting-plant-ebook/dp/B009FIAMXS
Catch up with Keith
at his blog http://dirtsdiary.blogspot.co.nz/
Reviews
.....I
found this book to be a great read. Part Space Opera, part satire, this is a
very kiwi novel in many respects. It takes really earthly themes like our
preoccupation with sustainability and the exploitation of diminishing resources
and combines these with the apparent inability of a super alien society to deal
with the change required to accommodate this. Whole the novel is somewhat
predictable it is entertaining and worth a read.
.....A
clever allegory and an engaging read…….
Interesting
and easy to read. Keith keeps the suspense through rich descriptions and
engaging conversations. Themes of environmental awareness and spiritual
discoveries are especially relevant to today's Western culture. The allegory of
technically advanced but spiritually poor aliens that lack a purpose in life
keep reminding you of people you meet in everyday life. The everyday
familiarity in a science fiction setting makes this book stand out.
.....This
is a very easy book to read. I loved the hero with his local New Zealand
connection and "all will be right" attitude.
.....A
very good read - if you like a bit of science fiction.
If
you read between the lines or look a little deeper into the story it is not far
from current happenings today.
.....The
two main characters are easy to relate to for many who would read this book.
And
I think that being able to relate to these two makes the book so engaging and
easy to read.
The
story also gives you somethings to think about and touches on many of the
problems faced in today's world.
Saturday, 6 October 2012
Published at last
I have long been a frustrated author. Being a writer is something that I have always wanted to do. There is a literary bent in the family so I guess this isn't all that unusual.
If I was being honest with myself the reason that I have never really pursued writing as a career option is a lack of confidence and drive. The started with being dissuaded from a potential career as a journalist by well a well meaning but in hindsight incompetent careers advisor at school. She suggested I start an apprenticeship as a typesetter instead. Continued with family and friends telling me that I needed a real job, rejection and my own lack of confidence.
This isn't to say that I haven't written, submitted work to publishers or even had a go at self publishing. When I might have given this a real go the realities of earning a living, mortgages and a need for some kind of financial security got in the way.
Latterly I have been interested in playing with helmet cams and writing or even thinking about it hasn't been high on my list of priorities.
Cue a life changing event, the end of a relationship that I thought was the real deal, a new relationship and the gift of a Kindle.
Among other things the Kindle reinvigorated my interest in reading. I have been at times a voracious reader and have often probably withdrawn from the real world and into the world of print more often that I should have. Latterly I have become much more picky in my reading and loathe to spend money on books from authors that weren't on my personal safe list.
The Kindle has changed all this and while I still buy from mainstream authors there are huge numbers of free or very cheap tittles available that I have entertained myself with. As I have sampled the good, bad and barely readable I came to the realisation that my work is at least as good if not better than some of the titles I was reading and in many cases paying for.
Over the last several months I have dusted off, reviewed and honed one of my masterpieces and in the last week or so published it on Amazon.
I know there are other platforms to use and maybe I will review them in time but Amazon is the industry standard for self publishing and once I had sorted out the formatting issues the process is painless.
So read the book if you have the time and interest and if you do keep an eye out for the sequel that i am busy polishing and updating.
Kindle version or Buy a hard copy version
Brrrp - now I need to check the bike out because I haven't ridden it in months.......
If I was being honest with myself the reason that I have never really pursued writing as a career option is a lack of confidence and drive. The started with being dissuaded from a potential career as a journalist by well a well meaning but in hindsight incompetent careers advisor at school. She suggested I start an apprenticeship as a typesetter instead. Continued with family and friends telling me that I needed a real job, rejection and my own lack of confidence.
This isn't to say that I haven't written, submitted work to publishers or even had a go at self publishing. When I might have given this a real go the realities of earning a living, mortgages and a need for some kind of financial security got in the way.
Latterly I have been interested in playing with helmet cams and writing or even thinking about it hasn't been high on my list of priorities.
Cue a life changing event, the end of a relationship that I thought was the real deal, a new relationship and the gift of a Kindle.
Among other things the Kindle reinvigorated my interest in reading. I have been at times a voracious reader and have often probably withdrawn from the real world and into the world of print more often that I should have. Latterly I have become much more picky in my reading and loathe to spend money on books from authors that weren't on my personal safe list.
The Kindle has changed all this and while I still buy from mainstream authors there are huge numbers of free or very cheap tittles available that I have entertained myself with. As I have sampled the good, bad and barely readable I came to the realisation that my work is at least as good if not better than some of the titles I was reading and in many cases paying for.
Over the last several months I have dusted off, reviewed and honed one of my masterpieces and in the last week or so published it on Amazon.
I know there are other platforms to use and maybe I will review them in time but Amazon is the industry standard for self publishing and once I had sorted out the formatting issues the process is painless.
So read the book if you have the time and interest and if you do keep an eye out for the sequel that i am busy polishing and updating.
Kindle version or Buy a hard copy version
Brrrp - now I need to check the bike out because I haven't ridden it in months.......
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